Text: this is as simplistic a description of what a martyr is required to be and the proof necessary to prove that validity of the cause.

Correct capitalization: This is as simplistic a description of what a martyr is required to be and the proof necessary to prove that validity of the cause.


Text: it is controllable in the conversion process.

Correct capitalization: It is controllable in the conversion process.


Text: in all the years i lived in lorain, i never heard anything about the bridge being haunted; i count myself an expert on the local phenomena.

Correct capitalization: In all the years I lived in Lorain, I never heard anything about the bridge being haunted; I count myself an expert on the local phenomena.


Text: you didn’t get your serial number.

Correct capitalization:
You didn’t get your serial number.