“the san design and configuration meant we had an overemphasis on performance features rather than stability or resilience — a relatively small disk drive failure had a large impact — only 12 of some 800 disk drives failed, but they impacted most ato systems,” jordan said.

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Answer: “The SAN design and configuration meant we had an overemphasis on performance features rather than stability or resilience — a relatively small disk drive failure had a large impact — only 12 of some 800 disk drives failed, but they impacted most ATO systems,” Jordan said.
there is an evil which i have seen under the sun, and it is heavy on men:

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Answer: There is an evil which I have seen under the sun, and it is heavy on men:
4:6 and the lord god prepared an ivy, and it came up over the head of jonas, to be a shadow over his head, and to cover him (for he was fatigued): and jonas was exceeding glad of the ivy.

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Answer: 4:6 And the Lord God prepared an ivy, and it came up over the head of Jonas, to be a shadow over his head, and to cover him (for he was fatigued): and Jonas was exceeding glad of the ivy.
often in the background - but always indispensable.

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Answer: Often in the background - but always indispensable.