Please capitalize where necessary: to begin your free file analysis, simply drag-and-drop your bfc file inside the dotted lines below, or click "browse my computer" and select your file.
A: To begin your free file analysis, simply drag-and-drop your BFC file inside the dotted lines below, or click "Browse My Computer" and select your file.

Please capitalize where necessary: search: when you first use search on your phone, you are asked whether or not you’d like to allow search to use your location information. in android, the browser settings page allows you to turn off browser location entirely or clear the sites that you have previously given permission to access your location.
A: Search: When you first use Search on your phone, you are asked whether or not you’d like to allow Search to use your location information. In Android, the browser settings page allows you to turn off browser location entirely or clear the sites that you have previously given permission to access your location.

Please capitalize where necessary: 750 electric hook-ups (10 amps)
A: 750 Electric hook-ups (10 amps)

Please capitalize where necessary: please note, however, that falling trends often last for a long time, and disappointment is often followed by more disappointment.
A:
Please note, however, that falling trends often last for a long time, and disappointment is often followed by more disappointment.