Please capitalize where necessary: on the other hand, merian and büchel agree that death looks away from the pope, while hans bock lets death turn his head towards the pope.
A: On the other hand, Merian and Büchel agree that Death looks away from the Pope, while Hans Bock lets Death turn his head towards the Pope.

Please capitalize where necessary: this essentially helps by just getting rid of the toxic compounds in the system which indirectly helps speed up hair growth.
A: This essentially helps by just getting rid of the toxic compounds in the system which indirectly helps speed up hair growth.

Please capitalize where necessary: yet, women are the desire of all to feed and cook more often and much earlier than men - namely, from childhood.
A: Yet, women are the desire of all to feed and cook more often and much earlier than men - namely, from childhood.

Please capitalize where necessary: i’m now 9 years past diagnosis with no treatment and doing great!…michael
A:
I’m now 9 years past diagnosis with no treatment and doing great!…Michael