Please capitalize where necessary: you would not be able to send back a real-time updating and tracking — maybe we’re just not thinking about this correctly.
A: You would not be able to send back a real-time updating and tracking — maybe we’re just not thinking about this correctly.

Please capitalize where necessary: this message indicates that something went wrong with the memory card so it is not allowing you to access files from it.
A: This message indicates that something went wrong with the memory card so it is not allowing you to access files from it.

Please capitalize where necessary: if you want to know in advance what turns me off: fake and rude people
A: If you want to know in advance what turns me off: Fake and rude people

Please capitalize where necessary: the style arises from the scandinavian formalism where the expression is simple and pure. the designs must be wearable, but every collection should also include ideas to how jewellery can challenge established concepts of what a piece of accessory is.
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The style arises from the Scandinavian formalism where the expression is simple and pure. The designs must be wearable, but every collection should also include ideas to how jewellery can challenge established concepts of what a piece of accessory is.