Add spaces: ""IfIweregoingtogradeagameonjustthegraphics,thenBattleDragonswouldgetaperfectscore.

Answer: ""If I were going to grade a game on just the graphics, then Battle Dragons would get a perfect score.

Add spaces: CheckratesandavailabilityforThanhHaGuesthouse.Thenproceedtobooking.

Answer: Check rates and availability for Thanh Ha Guesthouse. Then proceed to booking.

Add spaces: LastyearIwenttotheDPconcertinMalmoe.Iwasthrillednotjusttotheconcert,Ialsohadabackstagepassandwasmaybegoingtomeettheband!!!ThiswasthefirsttimeformebehindthestageandIdidn'treallyhaveaclueweretogo.

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Last year I went to the DPconcert in Malmoe. I was thrilled not just to the concert, I also had a backstage pass and was maybe going to meet the band!!! This was the first time for me behind the stage and I didn't really have a clue were to go.