Text: if you want to know in advance what turns me off: rude people and guys who always beg :)

Correct capitalization: If you want to know in advance what turns me off: Rude people and guys who always BEG :)


Text: during his last year [at the university of pennsylvania] adrain had serious problems with discipline in his classes.

Correct capitalization: During his last year [at the University of Pennsylvania] Adrain had serious problems with discipline in his classes.


Text: the pharisees were as supreme in this new citadel as the levites once in babylon, but in the outer world they espied a new enemy.

Correct capitalization: The Pharisees were as supreme in this new citadel as the Levites once in Babylon, but in the outer world they espied a new enemy.


Text: the souk dates back to 1382 (if there's enough time), one of the most famous and oldest bazaars in the middle east. in addition to the countless shops, there are several coffeehouses, restaurants and street vendors distributed throughout the market.

Correct capitalization:
The souk dates back to 1382 (if there's enough time), one of the most famous and oldest bazaars in the Middle East. In addition to the countless shops, there are several coffeehouses, restaurants and street vendors distributed throughout the market.