although joanne k. has great strength of character and will always be a "survivor" throughout her life, in childhood she needs to begin to understand that "inner" is as real as "outer", and that fun and emotional spontaneity are as important as a clear mind and a responsible attitude toward life.
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Although Joanne K. has great strength of character and will always be a "survivor" throughout her life, in childhood she needs to begin to understand that "inner" is as real as "outer", and that fun and emotional spontaneity are as important as a clear mind and a responsible attitude toward life.