Please capitalize where necessary: comments(9) - submitted by jp / translated by jp
A: Comments(9) - Submitted by jp / Translated by jp

Please capitalize where necessary: biomar global r&d present topics like "feeding an exercising fish", illustrating among other things that a fish that is exercising has special nutritional requirements.
A: BioMar Global R&D present topics like "Feeding an exercising fish", illustrating among other things that a fish that is exercising has special nutritional requirements.

Please capitalize where necessary: each bug is given a number, and is kept on file until it is marked as having been dealt with.
A: Each bug is given a number, and is kept on file until it is marked as having been dealt with.

Please capitalize where necessary: by taking account of all the environmental impacts in a product's life cycle, one avoids suboptimisation, i.e. modifications resulting in environmental improvements in one phase of the product's life, e.g. production, leading to increased environmental impacts in another phase of the life cycle, e.g. disposal, and the environmental work can be addressed to those phases in the product's life cycle in which the greatest environmental improvements can be achieved.
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By taking account of all the environmental impacts in a product's life cycle, one avoids suboptimisation, i.e. modifications resulting in environmental improvements in one phase of the product's life, e.g. production, leading to increased environmental impacts in another phase of the life cycle, e.g. disposal, and the environmental work can be addressed to those phases in the product's life cycle in which the greatest environmental improvements can be achieved.