Problem: Add spaces: Thetophalfislikewisecoveredinbothsnowandice,soincontrasttothedescriptionswehavereaditdoesn’tlooklikewewillbetouchingrockonourclimb...

Spaces added: The top half is likewise covered in both snow and ice, so in contrast to the descriptions we have read it doesn’t look like we will be touching rock on our climb...

Problem: Add spaces: In1980,HeKongdeassumedtheofficeofthedeputydirectorofcreationstudiooftheMilitaryMuseumandretiredin1987

Spaces added: In1980, He Kongde assumed the office of the deputy director of creation studio of the Military Museum and retired in 1987

Problem: Add spaces: Everythingseemedtoturndeathlyquiet,withtheexceptionofafaint,annoyingbuzzingsoundthatseemedtooriginatefaroffinthedistanceacrossthewater.

Spaces added: Everything seemed to turn deathly quiet, with the exception of a faint, annoying buzzing sound that seemed to originate far off in the distance across the water.

Problem: Add spaces: Eachofyoucanlessentheimpactuponthosewhoonlyunderstandwhattheyseebeforetheireyes,bykeepingcalmandlettingothersknowthatallthatishappeningisfortheultimategoodofall.

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Each of you can lessen the impact upon those who only understand what they see before their eyes, by keeping calm and letting others know that all that is happening is for the ultimate good of all.