Text: the day began with a conference with input from internal as well as external presenters.

Correct capitalization: The day began with a conference with input from internal as well as external presenters.


Text: it takes nine months for a human baby to grow, 22-months for a much larger baby elephant to grow...but how long does it take to grow a planet? it turns out, it takes much less time than we thought.

Correct capitalization: It takes nine months for a human baby to grow, 22-months for a much larger baby elephant to grow...but how long does it take to grow a planet? It turns out, it takes much less time than we thought.


Text: sorry, but it seemed to me that hint "requires runtime vb6" is clear enough can once again: it is required.

Correct capitalization: Sorry, but it seemed to me that hint "requires runtime VB6" is clear enough Can once again: it is required.


Text: never disconnect the dslr camera during transfer / copying process

Correct capitalization:
Never disconnect the DSLR camera during transfer / copying process