Please capitalize where necessary: onsitestudio used a dark gray coalfired brick to a number of cubes in the large space containing bar, storage and toilets.
A: Onsitestudio used a dark gray coalfired brick to a number of cubes in the large space containing bar, storage and toilets.

Please capitalize where necessary: all sizes: work until piece measures 24-25-26 cm.
A: All sizes: Work until piece measures 24-25-26 cm.

Please capitalize where necessary: they lived eight to ten to a room and they did not have the funds to bury their dead right away so when a member died the body had to be kept in the same room until they found the means to arrange the burial.
A: They lived eight to ten to a room and they did not have the funds to bury their dead right away so when a member died the body had to be kept in the same room until they found the means to arrange the burial.

Please capitalize where necessary: 17 david said to god, “isn’t it i who commanded the people to be counted? it is even i who have sinned and done very wickedly; but these sheep, what have they done? please let your hand, o lord my god, be against me, and against my father’s house; but not against your people, that they should be plagued.”
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17 David said to God, “Isn’t it I who commanded the people to be counted? It is even I who have sinned and done very wickedly; but these sheep, what have they done? Please let your hand, O LORD my God, be against me, and against my father’s house; but not against your people, that they should be plagued.”