some think that wealth and power protect them and they fight to attain these benefits. but sooner or later they come to the realization that happiness cannot be purchased and that the one who seems powerful, confident and great is exactly as powerless as everyone else in life's manifestation of fate.

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Some think that wealth and power protect them and they fight to attain these benefits. But sooner or later they come to the realization that happiness cannot be purchased and that the one who seems powerful, confident and great is exactly as powerless as everyone else in life's manifestation of fate.