it would also please me if the path to the just as life-givingly large and positive public that also exists could become easier, so that no one could dream of compromising on levels and standards or of strutting in more borrowed plumes than strictly necessary (however many that might be).

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It would also please me if the path to the just as life-givingly large and positive public that also exists could become easier, so that no one could dream of compromising on levels and standards or of strutting in more borrowed plumes than strictly necessary (however many that might be).