Please capitalize where necessary: the latest version makes registration mandatory, and telemetry is also collected.
A: The latest version makes registration mandatory, and Telemetry is also collected.

Please capitalize where necessary: nlslexicons0013.dll program freezing and system crashing: important system components such as nlslexicons0011.dll and nlslexicons0018.dll become abnormal.
A: NlsLexicons0013.dll program freezing and system crashing: Important system components such as NlsLexicons0011.dll and NlsLexicons0018.dll become abnormal.

Please capitalize where necessary: you can not do that, you know? can not have such an attitude like, you don’t have then you’re lazy to achieve and then you say, “oh, no, i don’t care. i renounce everything.”
A: You can not do that, you know? Can not have such an attitude like, you don’t have then you’re lazy to achieve and then you say, “Oh, no, I don’t care. I renounce everything.”

Please capitalize where necessary: i have long blonde hair and black eyes.
A:
I have long blonde hair and black eyes.