Please capitalize where necessary: 26:28agrippa said to paul, "with a little persuasion are you trying to make me a christian?"
A: 26:28Agrippa said to Paul, "With a little persuasion are you trying to make me a Christian?"

Please capitalize where necessary: among other things, he quotes jeremiah 23:29, “‘is not my word like a fire?’ says the lord, ‘and like a hammer that breaks the rock in pieces?’”
A: Among other things, he quotes Jeremiah 23:29, “‘Is not My word like a fire?’ Says the Lord, ‘and like a hammer that breaks the rock in pieces?’”

Please capitalize where necessary: if you want to know in advance what turns me off: rude people, fast cummers and beggers
A: If you want to know in advance what turns me off: Rude people, fast cummers and beggers

Please capitalize where necessary: " freely you have received, freely give " (matthew 10:8)
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" Freely you have received, freely give " (Matthew 10:8)