Text: you will tap water like electricity from the mains, at two water connectors.

Correct capitalization: You will tap water like electricity from the mains, at two Water Connectors.


Text: actually, it is the adolescent who is naive, ignorant and untaught in the truth about the facts of life!

Correct capitalization: Actually, it is the adolescent who is naive, ignorant and untaught in the TRUTH about the facts of life!


Text: however, they may perceive things now hidden from me, and, above all, they will find that it was all necessary to the state of affairs in which they find themselves (and that, in the case of historians, is usually a comfortable one).

Correct capitalization: However, they may perceive things now hidden from me, and, above all, they will find that it was all necessary to the state of affairs in which they find themselves (and that, in the case of historians, is usually a comfortable one).


Text: you went away from there, perhaps traveled out into the wide world, and after a few years you have returned. you see the same woods, now surrounding a large, green meadow, where fragrant hay is stacked in front of pretty farmhouses.

Correct capitalization:
You went away from there, perhaps traveled out into the wide world, and after a few years you have returned. You see the same woods, now surrounding a large, green meadow, where fragrant hay is stacked in front of pretty farmhouses.