Problem: Add spaces: WashedbytheOceans,blownbyWinds,highandunapproachableRocksandCliffsforaverylongtimestrytoremindusthatthereisnosuchathingasatimeinEternity.

Spaces added: Washed by the Oceans, blown by Winds, high and unapproachable Rocks and Cliffs for a very long times try to remind us that there is no such a thing as a time in Eternity.

Problem: Add spaces: Creategeofencesincircleorrectangleforkeylocations

Spaces added: Create geofences in circle or rectangle for key locations

Problem: Add spaces: DepartHanoiat8.30amanddrivebyprivatecoachtoHalongCity(3.5hours)passingverdantfarmlandandwitnessthedailylifeofthelocalpeasantfarmers.ArriveinHalongatnoon,boardyourboatandenjoylunchincludingfreshseafoodasyouembarkona4hourscruiseintotheBayoftheDescendingDragon.

Spaces added: Depart Hanoi at 8.30am and drive by private coach to Halong City (3.5 hours) passing verdant farmland and witness the daily life of the local peasant farmers. Arrive in Halong at noon, board your boat and enjoy lunch including fresh seafood as you embark on a 4 hours cruise into the Bay of the Descending Dragon.

Problem: Add spaces: 1.5SharpeningtheFocus(fromourperspective)

Spaces added:
1.5 Sharpening the Focus (from our perspective)