Please capitalize where necessary: if the cell accepts the new dna, a duplicate embryo is formed. however, the embryo cell may reject the new dna and die. also, it is very possible that the embryo may not survive having the original genetic material removed from its nucleus.
A: If the cell accepts the new DNA, a duplicate embryo is formed. However, the embryo cell may reject the new DNA and die. Also, it is very possible that the embryo may not survive having the original genetic material removed from its nucleus.

Please capitalize where necessary: 2:13 awaiting the blessed hope and appearing of the glory of our great god and saviour jesus christ;
A: 2:13 awaiting the blessed hope and appearing of the glory of our great God and Saviour Jesus Christ;

Please capitalize where necessary: for more detailed information concerning situation & directions, prices as well as classification of the campsite see the current ecc-campingguide, a0153.
A: For more detailed information concerning situation & directions, prices as well as classification of the campsite see the current ECC-Campingguide, A0153.

Please capitalize where necessary: but this is rarely the case in marketing departments, especially when the department is responsible for the communication tasks and not directly related to sales or customer experiences.
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But this is rarely the case in marketing departments, especially when the department is responsible for the communication tasks and not directly related to sales or customer experiences.