Text: all walls can be detached, large ventilation window in each side wall, 6 possible entrances and robust, hard wearing awning fabric, extensive frame equipment.

Correct capitalization: All walls can be detached, large ventilation window in each side wall, 6 possible entrances and robust, hard wearing awning fabric, extensive frame equipment.


Text: dress her up in a cute golf outfit do her hair and choose some jewelries as well.

Correct capitalization: Dress her up in a cute golf outfit do her hair and choose some jewelries as well.


Text: one could say that they are “invisible”.

Correct capitalization: One could say that they are “invisible”.


Text: the ancient rabbinical writings which are the original comments on the biblical texts incorporate a narrative from “exodus” and expand the course of a romantic event, where the great initiated, jethro, had the beautiful daughter zipporah who was in love with moses.

Correct capitalization:
The ancient Rabbinical Writings which are the original comments on the biblical texts incorporate a narrative from “Exodus” and expand the course of a romantic event, where the great initiated, Jethro, had the beautiful daughter Zipporah who was in love with Moses.