After a few quick pictures in the park and along the thoroughfare, where Marre could prove for some more people, we returned home to Marre. Out on the main road we had many appreciative gesture and we were both happy when we went further.

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after a few quick pictures in the park and along the thoroughfare, where marre could prove for some more people, we returned home to marre. out on the main road we had many appreciative gesture and we were both happy when we went further.