Text: 11 now one day, when he had gone there, he went into the little room and took his rest there.

Correct capitalization: 11 Now one day, when he had gone there, he went into the little room and took his rest there.


Text: when the story reaches a more or less verifiable event (the fall of babylon) it is portrayed in such a way as to foster this same notion.

Correct capitalization: When the story reaches a more or less verifiable event (the fall of Babylon) it is portrayed in such a way as to foster this same notion.


Text: lissajous studied beats seen when his tuning forks had slightly different frequencies, in this case a rotating ellipse is seen.

Correct capitalization: Lissajous studied beats seen when his tuning forks had slightly different frequencies, in this case a rotating ellipse is seen.


Text: all these killing factors make our lives a miserable time.

Correct capitalization:
All these killing factors make our lives a miserable time.