Gary Kildall of the Naval Postgraduate School in Monterey, California acquired one of the early personal computers and he immediately proceeded to develop an operating system for it.

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GaryKildalloftheNavalPostgraduateSchoolinMonterey,Californiaacquiredoneoftheearlypersonalcomputersandheimmediatelyproceededtodevelopanoperatingsystemforit.