10. However, by connecting the dots of what is reported, you can see the light forces’ progress even without much public exposure of persons who have committed crimes against humanity, corruption or theft on an unimaginable scale.

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10. however, by connecting the dots of what is reported, you can see the light forces’ progress even without much public exposure of persons who have committed crimes against humanity, corruption or theft on an unimaginable scale.