also in 1795 the bureau des longitudes was founded with lagrange and laplace as the mathematicians among its founding members and laplace went on to lead the bureau and the paris observatory. however although some considered he did a fine job in these posts others criticised him for being too theoretical.

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Also in 1795 the Bureau des Longitudes was founded with Lagrange and Laplace as the mathematicians among its founding members and Laplace went on to lead the Bureau and the Paris Observatory. However although some considered he did a fine job in these posts others criticised him for being too theoretical.