Add spaces: Inadditionthereweredozensofsmallersatellitecampsdevotedtothewareconomy.

Answer: In addition there were dozens of smaller satellite camps devoted to the war economy.

Add spaces: ForJoshuadrewnotbackhishand,wherewithhestretchedoutthejavelin,untilhehadutterlydestroyedalltheinhabitantsofAi.

Answer: For Joshua drew not back his hand, wherewith he stretched out the javelin, until he had utterly destroyed all the inhabitants of Ai.

Add spaces: AnextradimensiontotheVIPSchemeistheLoyaltyRewardsfeature;thisprovidesanadditionalbenefittothemostconsistentmembersoftheVIPSchemealongsidethestandardrewards.

Answer:
An extra dimension to the VIP Scheme is the Loyalty Rewards feature; this provides an additional benefit to the most consistent members of the VIP Scheme alongside the standard rewards.